It has been an interesting and entertaining thought experiment, happy to be along for the journey.
What did you learn from it?
As per usual I would say the morale of the story is be careful what you wish for. Seeing as how my perspective remains aligned with the sub, but by taking a step back I could argue that from the doms perspective the morale would be don't be afraid of taking what you want, because it could be as easy as pressing a button.
Still not sure if i like the ending. It ties up a coupel of lose ends, but I guess maybe was expecting a little more. But it was a nice ride and I really appreciate all that you put into it.
Maybe it's romantic in me. But, in my head, I hoped she would finally admit to him what she was dancing around. Her need for Him to be in her life. In this closing chapter, she still doesn't say it, but we all know she is thinking it...
Her problem is that she does need him, but can't say it and can't negotiate or do anything that seems to give him any leverage.
The book is supposed to be a dark romance, so maybe I need to make it clearer that he does know, and chooses - as an act of submission - just to go with it.
Thanks for the feedback!
(Oh if you like Romance, did you see my Fall In Chastity series that's currently on the back burner?)
That finale was perfection.
Thanks that means a lot to me.
And thanks for being along for the ride.
It has been an interesting and entertaining thought experiment, happy to be along for the journey.
What did you learn from it?
As per usual I would say the morale of the story is be careful what you wish for. Seeing as how my perspective remains aligned with the sub, but by taking a step back I could argue that from the doms perspective the morale would be don't be afraid of taking what you want, because it could be as easy as pressing a button.
Interesting question. I'll have to mull that over.
Very nice despite the musky gloop. The oozing welts kinda balance that for my reading.
...apart from the "giants" popping up now and then, reminded me unpleasantly of whatshisname onthewebsiteoverthere, but I get why it's there.
Still not sure if i like the ending. It ties up a coupel of lose ends, but I guess maybe was expecting a little more. But it was a nice ride and I really appreciate all that you put into it.
Interesting. What was missing for you? (I have to revise all this to publish it.)
Maybe it's romantic in me. But, in my head, I hoped she would finally admit to him what she was dancing around. Her need for Him to be in her life. In this closing chapter, she still doesn't say it, but we all know she is thinking it...
Her problem is that she does need him, but can't say it and can't negotiate or do anything that seems to give him any leverage.
The book is supposed to be a dark romance, so maybe I need to make it clearer that he does know, and chooses - as an act of submission - just to go with it.
Thanks for the feedback!
(Oh if you like Romance, did you see my Fall In Chastity series that's currently on the back burner?)