It took me a while to find something to comment on with this one. I think we aren't just seeing Hal waking up to see his Mistress clearly. I think we have seen Shona's confidence in herself improve. While Hal struggles to maintain his composure, Shona calmly gives orders to be obeyed knowing that they will be. She is truly very statuesque, cold, almost unreadable, but highly sure of herself. We see no hint anymore of her mother reminding her to be "nice".
I suppose. If I am really looking at this as objectively as I can. I feel much less of a need to stand up for Hal, now that he has stated his hatred/rage for himself. So I don't have the same emotional reaction to this as I have previous chapters.
LOL If they were role models, there wouldn't be as much of a story. I'm just bad at building in character flaws. I need to work on that. Hal will settle down and accept his place after his whipping. He'll be too physically amd emotionally drained to put up a fight. The gag is a gift really. he can scream and curse and get angry all he wants to while he is being whipped, and it won't change his service.
Shona meanwhile will no doubt order Hal to fuck her with that dong of his to further drive home that he is there to serve her and nothing else. Hal will still be wildly turned on by this whole predicament, further helping to cement his place and calm down further.
Shona will send him away to his cell and sleep peacefully. Hal's ego having been completely shattered will do as he is told.
and the story will go on to be the erotica it was meant to be.
It took me a while to find something to comment on with this one. I think we aren't just seeing Hal waking up to see his Mistress clearly. I think we have seen Shona's confidence in herself improve. While Hal struggles to maintain his composure, Shona calmly gives orders to be obeyed knowing that they will be. She is truly very statuesque, cold, almost unreadable, but highly sure of herself. We see no hint anymore of her mother reminding her to be "nice".
Yes, that's the general idea. If this were a movie, then "Let it go" would be the soundtrack.
I suppose. If I am really looking at this as objectively as I can. I feel much less of a need to stand up for Hal, now that he has stated his hatred/rage for himself. So I don't have the same emotional reaction to this as I have previous chapters.
I don't think either character is a role model. But maybe they can be happy together. Sort of.
LOL If they were role models, there wouldn't be as much of a story. I'm just bad at building in character flaws. I need to work on that. Hal will settle down and accept his place after his whipping. He'll be too physically amd emotionally drained to put up a fight. The gag is a gift really. he can scream and curse and get angry all he wants to while he is being whipped, and it won't change his service.
Shona meanwhile will no doubt order Hal to fuck her with that dong of his to further drive home that he is there to serve her and nothing else. Hal will still be wildly turned on by this whole predicament, further helping to cement his place and calm down further.
Shona will send him away to his cell and sleep peacefully. Hal's ego having been completely shattered will do as he is told.
and the story will go on to be the erotica it was meant to be.
;)