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Your original thought experiment continues! The Evil one who questions whether she is ethical? Just where have you taken us my friend? It's like you want to portray realistic emotions or something :P

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Oh, that was supposed to be her joking about Colleen pretending to be her therapist and making her pay the bill through sexual services.

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Ah. I see now. A clever writers tactic. Just an excuse to justify a sex scene between Shona and Colleen. I should have known lol

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Well, I wanted to show that Shona does think about ethics, just not in relation to men.

I obviously need to make that clearer!

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Or I'm just dense lol

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Well maybe the blood wasn't in your brain at that point.

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A friend pointed out a missed word.

"Except it would be ***not*** OK to treat a dog that way."

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I did wonder about this bit.

Good chapter, even the lesbian bits ;-p

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Thanks!

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