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John's avatar

Your original thought experiment continues! The Evil one who questions whether she is ethical? Just where have you taken us my friend? It's like you want to portray realistic emotions or something :P

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Giles English's avatar

Oh, that was supposed to be her joking about Colleen pretending to be her therapist and making her pay the bill through sexual services.

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John's avatar

Ah. I see now. A clever writers tactic. Just an excuse to justify a sex scene between Shona and Colleen. I should have known lol

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Giles English's avatar

Well, I wanted to show that Shona does think about ethics, just not in relation to men.

I obviously need to make that clearer!

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John's avatar

Or I'm just dense lol

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Giles English's avatar

Well maybe the blood wasn't in your brain at that point.

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Giles English's avatar

A friend pointed out a missed word.

"Except it would be ***not*** OK to treat a dog that way."

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SkinShallow's avatar

I did wonder about this bit.

Good chapter, even the lesbian bits ;-p

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Giles English's avatar

Thanks!

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