Discussion about this post

User's avatar
John's avatar

What can I say. Another beautifully written chapter my friend.

Like I've always told you these are real people to me. Angela was a very refreshing change to Shona!

I had to laugh that it took Hal 5 orgasms before he put the pieces together though lol.

If there is anything missing or wrong with this chapter I don't know what it could be. There is detail in everything, you keep everyone grounded with location with every scene change.

I loved this part "Hal should march right back to Mistr--- to Miss Armstrong... to Shona... and tell her where to get off." Showing where Hal is already struggling to maintain his sense of individuality. He is thinking like a slave, whether he wants to or not. He is angry, he even admits that he is angry, but he is choosing to make the best of his situation and enjoy himself anyway, which of course is only going to reinforce that he likes being a slave in the long run, as we both know.

That level of detail is what really sets your writing apart.

I await your next chapter as always.

Expand full comment
tayphad67's avatar

Hal has a real problem there. Do these ladies ever get into anal? Now I see why a lot of Mistresses feminize their slaves. What sluts are their slaves!

Expand full comment
6 more comments...

No posts