A Femdom coming of age in the CARGO 'verse, where the NHS installs permanent chastity devices!
Hi, looking forward to seeing this one develop!
One small thing: you call Milo "Hal" a couple of times. Freudian slip, or intention?
Damn. So use to writing a Hal on a different story. Will fix THANKS!
Great promise there! I'd pay money for this one.
I knew it was a good idea to give the MC a mate ;-p
I like how the "why" is only explained later, as justified by the narrative, no info dump.
Oh and only now I realised the double meaning behind Lckr 😂
;)
I'm still going to hell though.
Hell of a way to kick this off! following 2 boys this time? can't wait to read more of this
Hi, looking forward to seeing this one develop!
One small thing: you call Milo "Hal" a couple of times. Freudian slip, or intention?
Damn. So use to writing a Hal on a different story. Will fix THANKS!
Great promise there! I'd pay money for this one.
I knew it was a good idea to give the MC a mate ;-p
I like how the "why" is only explained later, as justified by the narrative, no info dump.
Oh and only now I realised the double meaning behind Lckr 😂
;)
I'm still going to hell though.
Hell of a way to kick this off! following 2 boys this time? can't wait to read more of this