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Hi, looking forward to seeing this one develop!

One small thing: you call Milo "Hal" a couple of times. Freudian slip, or intention?

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Damn. So use to writing a Hal on a different story. Will fix THANKS!

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Great promise there! I'd pay money for this one.

I knew it was a good idea to give the MC a mate ;-p

I like how the "why" is only explained later, as justified by the narrative, no info dump.

Oh and only now I realised the double meaning behind Lckr 😂

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;)

I'm still going to hell though.

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